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Wednesday, 27 July 2016

Here is my recount about one moment from my holiday

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  1. Hi Laviniah, I really enjoyed reading your story and really enjoyed the way that you described your main events with flash words. To improve on your story I encourage you to paragraph your story. Also it'll be awesome if you could tell us in your story what was your favourite part and why.
    From Gerry.

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