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Tuesday, 20 March 2018

Friendship

WALT: Write an explanation piece of writing about, 'What does friendship mean?'
SUCCESS CRITERIA: I will
  • Have a title, introduction, description, process and conclusion.
  • Use topic specific vocabulary
  • Self-assess myself to see where I think I am writing at.
Being a good friend

Friendship is when you are always there when your friend needs you. Don’t lie to them,respect them,appreciate them,help them, include all your friends in the game, and invite a new student were to go or ask them if you want to meet my friend.

Being a good friend means You make a friend and say hello you ask them if you want to go and play with them or sit down and ask them if they want to eat with me and talk and play together all day helping then finish their work so we can play and treating them the way you want to be treated.

In conclusion it is important to make a friend or else you will just get into trouble do you want that to happen to you i don’t think so.So if you see a person lonely then ask them if they won’t to play so take my advice and you will have cool friends.


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I think I am writing at Level : 3p




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