Comment time!!!!

Here is my zentangle art work

My sunshine reading

Here is my sunshine for my reading to be successfull I will need to change my voice to a better level and to look at my mistakes and grammas.

WALT say our speech's in confidence.

Today my whole classroom had to stand up and say there speeches what made me chose this speech topic is because sports is fun I didn't want to stand up  I know it was hard but I toke risk and done it.So if you like my video then please leave a comment.

Hour of Code or Learning to Code OR your own idea

We have been learning to code.  The coding I chose was minecraft
I enjoyed minecraft
It was challenging when it got onto number 7
I helped others by asking them for help.
I needed help with stage 7
It took me 35 minutes to finish the 12 stages.  I took screenshots as I worked my way through the stages.  When you look at the screenshots you can see how I used blocks to create the code which made me pass all the levels.

Dung beetles CSI

WALT: use our inferencing skill to help us understand the text.

Friendship

WALT: Write an explanation piece of writing about, 'What does friendship mean?'

SUCCESS CRITERIA: I will

• Have a title, introduction, description, process and conclusion.
• Use topic specific vocabulary
• Self-assess myself to see where I think I am writing at.

Being a good friend

Friendship is when you are always there when your friend needs you. Don’t lie to them,respect them,appreciate them,help them, include all your friends in the game, and invite a new student were to go or ask them if you want to meet my friend.

Being a good friend means You make a friend and say hello you ask them if you want to go and play with them or sit down and ask them if they want to eat with me and talk and play together all day helping then finish their work so we can play and treating them the way you want to be treated.

In conclusion it is important to make a friend or else you will just get into trouble do you want that to happen to you i don’t think so.So if you see a person lonely then ask them if they won’t to play so take my advice and you will have cool friends.

Ideas	Structure & language	organisation	sentence	vocabulary	spelling	punctuation	total
3	3	4	4	3	6	4	28

I think I am writing at Level : 3p